JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 33 - American Students

Are Ameican students falling behind compared to students from other countries?
American students are falling behind compared to students from other countries. For example, the DATA  is showning that American teenagers are dropping out of school. Drop outs have a higher chance of not getting a job,when they become adults.In adittion, most schools don't have classes for gifted students. The classes given depend on what grade your in which doesn't give a challenge if you learning something that you may already know. Due to the fact that everybody has a different learning RANGE. Also, COMPARED to other countries, our country doesn't get as much time in school. Other schools in other countries have a longer times for school. In conclusion, schools need to find a better way to educate teens that want to be successful.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 31 - Vandalism

Should parents be held accountable for their child's damage?

No, parents should not be accountable for their childs damage,the child should be responsible for what they have done. For an exaple, if there is a specfic damage that is not that bad the student should take care of it and pay for it because they are the reason that it got ruined. Also if it gets out of hand and it keeps on happening the court could start computing things for the kids to do so that they will not get into bigger trouble. By doing this students can Achieve there goals they have been and stop doing bad things such as vandalism. The students need to learn responsibility and pay for what they damaged, instead of the parents paying for, and the students getting away with it.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 30 - "D" Grades

Should schools eliminate "D" grades?

Schools should not eliminate the D grade.For example, It can be hard for students to INTERACT with their peers, with F's because they may not be able to participate in sports or dances, because they may not meet the GPA requirements.In addition, The INITIAL shock to parents and students could be bad if the D grade is eliminated, I had a D and the reaction from my family was not as bad as if I would have had an F.Also, Teachers would need to work summer school,to help the students to not fail and the school district and state would need to COMPENSATE for the time the teachers took during their time off.In conclusion,the D grade should not be eliminated.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 29 - School Conferences

Should parents face jail time for missing their child's school conferences?

Parents should not have to face jail time if they miss their child's school conference. One reason is because not all parents have the RESOURCES to get to their child's school. In addition parents have the oppourtunity to SEEK teachers in other ways than through a conference such as email, or telephone calls. Lastly, some students are TRANSFERRED to far away schools and that makes it more difficult for parents to attend. Overall, parents should not have to face jail time if they miss their child's school conference due to busy schedules.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 28

Global Positioning System (GPS) devices should not be used for habitually truant students.For example, requiring students to wear GPS devices say, that it adds to the workload of already overbusy school counselors who have to administer the program.”In addition, The conduct of using the GPS could have issues such as students throwing it in a bush near the school and then ditching.Also, smaking students wear GPS devices could make them feel out of their element because people are  treating them like criminals.In conclusion, Students should not be required to wear a GPS even thought they are habitually truant.

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JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 27

 Do school officials have the right to use drug-sniffing dogs?

I believe that school officials do have the right to use drug-sniffing dogs. For example, ,“ Many students ASSUME that their lockers are private property, but most school policies state that lockers belong to the school and therefore anything in them is subject to a search.” Although in reality they are the schools prperty, that they check out to you like teachers do with textbooks. In addition, “Many schools have RESPONDED to the use of drugs on campus by using drug-sniffing dogs to search lockers.” this would create a safer school enviroment because when people use drugs there emotions and actions change. Also, “Supporters of the drug-sniffing dogs say that the PROCESS protects innocent students.” It protects innocent students because some one could be found with but it may not be theres, someone could have planted it on them, by searching lockers students think, it is safe although it is not, so they will stash it in there locker. In conclusion,School officials should have the right to use drug-sniffing dogs.

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Academic Language Written Assessment Week 26

Would you want a car that drives itself?

I would want a car that drives itself because it would be easier to get to here I need to go and they would hopefully be less pollutant.For example, In 2010, Google Inc. proceeded with testing these cars on California’s roads. Some of the drives have occurred on crowded highways, through busy cities, and even down the most “crooked” street in the world, Lombard Street in San Francisco.In addition, according to Google Inc. Some of the methods used to drive the car accurately include the use of video cameras, radar sensors, and satellite maps. Also,Google hopes that robotic cars will improve highway safety, give people more free time, and reduce pollution.In conclusion,Yes I would want a car that drives itself because it would be safer, and less pollutant would be put in the air.

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Who or what has had a strong influence in your life?

My family has and has had  a strong influence on my life especially my little brothers.They have always had and will always have a strong influence on my life because they motivate me to get things done and stay on track. They also have a big influence on me because I know that since I am older than them I need to be a good role model, althought I do not live with them I know by talking on the phone , visiting with them and keeping my grades up I can be a good role model for them.My uncle is also another great influence in my life because he is always telling me im doing good and to keep it up but he also always tells me he believes in me and that he knows I can do anything I put my mind to,He motivates me more than just verbally, he is alwys so caring and when I got good grades for a long time he bought me a new quad not jusr because I needed a new one but because I earned it. My mom is constantly influencing me by telling me I am doing good and to keep it up but she also tells me if I set my mind to anything I can achieve it. My grandma is another great influence in my life she is always asking me if I have everything I need to suceed and that I can do all things. My family is such a great influence on my life, if I didnt have them I have no clue how I be, but because I have them I know I can do anything that I put my mind to.

Which holiday has the most meaning for you-Canada Day, Thanksgiving, Valentines Day--and why?

Thanksgiving is the holiday that has the most meaning for me. It has the most meaning because it is time for me to be with my family. It is also important to me because it is a day that I seem to really focus on what I am thankful for. I also like this holiday because my family makes really good food that I do not get very often. These are the reasons Thanksgiving has the most meaning and love from me.

What is your favourite month? Why?

My favorite month is July.My birthdayis in July which makes this moonth even more special because it is the month of my birth.Summer occurs during the month of July which brings warm weather that is great for swimming , being with friends , going to the beach and so much more.There is no school in July therefore I can sleep, hang out with friends and have time with family. For these reasons July is my favorite month.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 25

Should adults have the right to carry a concealed handgun?Adults should not have the right to carry a concealed handgun because it could be potentially dangerous.For example,Studies indicate that increased gun ownership leads to more gun crimes and unintended gun injuriesIn addition,With fewer guns on the street, society would be an established safer place,concealed handguns increase the chances of arguments becoming lethal and our country needs less guns on the street not more.Also, someone may get shot on accident and the person who is guilty can not completely justify what happened.In conclusion, for these reasons Adults should not have the right to carry a concealed handgun.

Academic Language Assessment Week 24

Is online learning an effective way to educate students?

Online learning is an effective way to educate students.For example, students can go at their own pace and ask the teacher to CLARIFY when needed.In addition,there are more courses available to students that are interesting  and DIFFERENTIATED to them,so they are more willing to do there work and motivated to get good grades. Also,Students can access their classes no matter what AREA they are in.They could be in the middle of the forest, middle of the desert or in the middle of the ocean and acces their classes as long as their is internet connection.In conclusion,online classes are effective in educating students.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 23

Should dog fighting be illegal?
Dog fighting should be illegal. For example, it is inhumane and defeats the purpose of nonviolence. This shows that, animals of any kinds should be treated like any person should. This also shows that, animals have feelings just as developed as humans. In addition, animals should not be used as entertainment especially when they are being put in DISTINCT  danger. This shows that, animals should not be anybody's source of POTENTIAL amusement dead or alive. This also shows that, animals should not be pent against each other if they are meant to harm one another. The people who house and allow these events to occur should be put in jail, because this act is just as bad as putting your child in danger. In conclusion, people should not be allowed to be harm for profit and should not  be allowed to live life without corruption.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 22

Should felons be allowed to vote?

Felons should not be allowed to vote. For example, felons should not be able to vote because there may be laws that they may vote for that are in their favor, says a SOURCE.In addition, this is a COMPLEX issue that has been being debated for years, they shouldnt have not have the right to voteAlso,people who commit serious crimes should not vote because they could vote for something that is RELEVANT, such as owning a weapon legally, if they committed murder.In conclusion, felons should not be able to vote.

 

 

 

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21

Should performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, be allowed in sports?

Performance enhancing drugs should not be allowed in sports.For example, in a period of time some other person will notice that they are using steroids they might get disqualified for it.In addition, the primary reason is to play fair in the first reason.Also,it is not a part of sports traditions because the tradition is to play fair.In conclusion, Steroids should not be allowed in sports.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 20

Should students receive a failing grade for plagiarizing?

Students should recieve a failing grade for plagiarizing.For example, students should receive a failing grade because they are not put the work in their own words and are showing that they are not ACADEMICALLY understanding.In addition, When students plagiarize they do not get the MAXIMUM benefit from what the teacher is trying to get the students to learnAlso,since plagiarizing is illegal,and adults can get fired from their job why should students be able to get away with it, it is better to get a failing grade then to get kicked out of school and what students don't realize is that there is technological resources that teachers can use to tell if students have plagiarized DOCUMENTS , therefore students should get a failing grade.In conclusion, I believe that students should recieve a failing grade for plagarizing.

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JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 19

Should the United States help countries like Haiti and Japan recover after a disaster?

The United States should help countries like Haiti and Japan recover after a disaster.For example, If we help other countries, they are more likely to INVEST their time helping us when we are in need.In addition, when we help other countries, we can SURVEY the land to see the damage and culture of how people react.Also, It was such a large REGION that was affected and we have the capability to help because of our military.In conclusion, the United States should hel;p other countries recover after a disaster.

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JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 18

Should teen drivers have special restrictions placed on their drivers' license?
Teens should have special restrictions put on their drivers' license.For example, to ACQUIRE a license, teens should have to be sixteen and have limits like no drugs in their system, a licensed adult until age 18 and no friends in the car.In addition,  having restrictions will limit the teen driving accidents due to distractions of having their friends in the car.Also, as a part of teen CULTURE teens think there should be no restrictions,however lawmakers have  wrapped up that restrictions are neccesary to prevent accidents and increase saftey.In conclusion, There should be restrictions put on teen driving liscenses.