Thursday, March 7, 2013

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 26

Would you want a car that drives itself?

I would want a car that drives itself because it would be easier to get to here I need to go and they would hopefully be less pollutant.For example, In 2010, Google Inc. proceeded with testing these cars on California’s roads. Some of the drives have occurred on crowded highways, through busy cities, and even down the most “crooked” street in the world, Lombard Street in San Francisco.In addition, according to Google Inc. Some of the methods used to drive the car accurately include the use of video cameras, radar sensors, and satellite maps. Also,Google hopes that robotic cars will improve highway safety, give people more free time, and reduce pollution.In conclusion,Yes I would want a car that drives itself because it would be safer, and less pollutant would be put in the air.

Source: Critical Reading Passage

1 comment:

  1. Angelica, I can tell that you used the information provided in the critical reading passage to add depth to your paragraph. Next time, cite your source. Good job!

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